Sally Sun's writting class

Thursday, March 29, 2007

translation(Draft two)

1Computers play a vital role in our daily life. They can help students hand in homework fast, and also help people deliver information in time. As long as you turn on the computers, you may be fond of them. However, be sure to tell yourself not to sit in front of computes too long. Most parents do not like their children depending on computers too much. Above all, it wastes time talking the electronic bulletin board system.
3Choosing TV channels carefully is vital. Although television is the most significant way of providing information and entertainment, it may have some defects. Some channels that are full of violence and lust have negative effects on teenagers. Spending too much time watching televisions also hurts the eyesight. Therefore, we should select the programs which are good for our bodies and minds. The most important thing is not to be a couch potato.

Saturday, March 24, 2007

Translation第1第3篇(Draft one)

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Computers play a vital role in our daily life. They can help students hand in homework fast, and also help people deliver information in time. As long as you turn on the computers, you may be fond of them. However, be sure to tell yourself not to sit in front of computes too long. Most parents do not like their children depending on computers too much. Above all, it wastes time to talk on the electronic bulletin board system.

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Choosing TV channels carefully is vital. Although television is the most significant way of providing information and entertainment, it may have some defects. Some channels that are full of violence and lust have negative effects on teenagers. Spending too much time watching televisions also hurts the eyesight. Therefore, we should select the programs which are good for our bodies and minds. The most important is not to be a couch potato.

Thursday, March 15, 2007

Having piles(Draft two)

Jane and York are good friends. One afternoon, York received a call from Jane. Jane was weeping and saying that she had piles. York felt sorry because he was also the victim of piles. York told Jane that she should go to see the doctor , and have it removed. Jane said that she was afraid that it would hurt. From that day on, York constantly encouraged Jane to go to the doctor and remove the piles. Finally, it was too painful for Jane to bear; therefore, she decided to have the piles removed. After removing the piles, Jane felt comfortable and thankful. So Jane asked York to marry her, and save other victims of piles with her.What a perfect ending!

Saturday, March 10, 2007

Having piles(Draft one)

Jane and York are good friends. One afternoon, York received a call from Jane. Janewas weeping and saying that she had piles. York felt sorry because he was also the victim of piles. York told Jane that she should go to wee the doctor ,and have it removed. Jane said that she was afraid that it would hurt. From that day on, York constantly encouraged Jane to go to the doctor and remove the piles. Finally, it was too painful for Jane to bear; therefore, she decided to have the piles removed. After removing the piles, Jane felt comfortable and thankful. So Jane asked York to marry her, and save other victims of piles with her.

Tuesday, March 06, 2007

Tips for Staying Healthy(Draft two)

People have paid more attention to the health recently. In my opinion, there are three tips for staying healthy. Firstly, take exercise frequently because exercise can prevent our bodies from aging. Like wise, exercise can help sweat , and then excrete the waste in our bodies. Secondly, quality sleep is also important. According to some researches, sleeping copiously can increase our bodies' immunity. Lastly, keep in a good mood anytime. Some experts pointed out that anger or nervousness may decrease cells' development , and even kill them. Above are the points for staying healthy. If you want to be healthy, keep them in mind!