A frightening experience(Draft two)

I had a frightening experience when I was four years old. It happened on an otherwise ordinary Sunday. As usual, I was at the beach, playing with my cousins, while my father and uncle were fishing. I was so curious that I went near the ocean to enjoy the sound of it .All at once, I felt unbalanced and then slipped into the ocean. At first, I firmly believed that I could be saved; therefore, I struggled to grab everything around me, but in vain. Gradually, I lost my energy and became unconscious. At the same time, all of my memoryies began to emerge in my mind just as a video was playing. Without any energy, I immediately fell into a faint for quite a few minutes. Seeing that I was drowning, my uncle came to my aid and saved me at once. When I regained my consciousness, I found myself lying on the seashore with my family around. They continued asking me if I felt all right. Because I forgot what had happened, I looked at them doubtfully. After listening what they said, I finally realized that I was saved by my uncle . After this accident, my family have stopped me going to the beach for a long time. As a saying goes,"Once bitten twice shy." Now, I still try not to go near the ocean. It was so frightening an experience that I still remember it now.

A frightening experience(Draft one)

I had a thriller of a frightening experience when I was young. It happened on an otherwise ordinary Sunday. As a usual, I was at the beach, playing with my cousins, while my father and uncle were fishing. All at once, I felt unbalanced and then slipped into the ocean. Initally, I firmly believed that I could be saved; therefore, I struggled to grab everything around me, but in vain. Gradually, I lost my energy and felt unconscious. At the same time, all of my memory began to emerge in my mind just as a video was projecting. Without any energy, I immediately fell into a swoon for quite a minutes. Discovering that I was drowning, my uncle came to my aid and saved me at once. When I recovered from consciousness, I found myself lay on the seashore with my family around. They continued to asked me if I felt great. Because I forgot what had happened a short while ago, I looked at them doubtfully. After their description, I finally realized that I was saved by my uncle . After this accident, my family have stopped me going to the beach for a long time. As a saying goes,” Once bitten twice shy.” Now, I still try not to approach the ocean. It was so frightening an experience that I still remember it till now.