Autobiograthy3-4(Draft1)

Like other students, I took the BCT after graduating from junior high school. My grades were not bad, and my classmates thought I would get into a senior high school. To their surprise, I chose Tainan Commercial Vocational senior which is famous. I selectedthis school, for I want to learn some practical skills, and I am also interested in English. On account of good curriculums and teachers this school offers, the improvement of English makes me have more interest on it. Therefore, I paid more attention to all the English competitions. I took part in National English Drama Competition when I was a second grader, and we got the No.5. It makes me learn the importance of unity and build the self-confidence. These precious experiences give me a colorful senior high life.

I am firmly determined to study Foreign Language after graduating from vocational school. Hopefully, I can be admitted to a good university to prove myself. I want to show others that vocational high school students can also make it. I know it will be difficult to accomplish it, but as the saying goes, ”Where there is a will, there is a way”. In addition, I plan to take Japanese cruises after getting into a university. I think learning Japanese can strengthen my language ability. I deeply believe that I can have a good future by getting into a good university and learning foreign languages and practical skills.

Autobiograthy(Draft 2)

At a silent night, many babies were born in Tainan city, and the luckiest one is me, my name is Sun Shao Jyuan. There are four members in my family. My father, a business person, is always busy doing his job to support my family. My mother is also a business person with a gentle personality. Since I was a baby, I have been well taken care of, for I am the firstborn . My parents offer me almost everything I need and help me keep habits. That’s why I am the luckiest one. Yet, being the firstborn , I have to set a good example to my young brother. Although I am under pressure of being a example, it makes me become responsible.

I enjoy playing musical instruments, and I am also adroit at them. Therefore, I joined thebrass band to learn to play more instruments. Although I bumped into many challenges during the process, I finally overcame all difficulties. In addition , I believe playing the instrument makes me relax and stabilize my mind. It is a good way to release my pressure. Furthermore, I am also interested in learning Japanese , which can increase my language ability. At the beginning, I knew nothing about Japanese, but gradually, I got to know it very well. Besides English, I choose Japanese as my minor major, andI think it will help me a lot when I apply for jobs in the future. I always play the instruments or read Japanese and English books in my free time. I am sure these will be helpful in the future.

Autobiograthy-1(Draft 1)

At a silent night, many babies were born in Tainan city, and the luckiest one is me, my name is Sun Shao Jyuan. There are four members in my family. My father, a business person, is always busy doing his job to support my family. My mother is also a business person with a gentle personality. Since I was a baby, I have been well taken are of, for I am the firstborn child. My parents offer me almost everything I need and help me keep habits. That’s why I am the luckiest one. Yet, being the firstborn child, I have to set a good example to my young brother. Although I am under pressure of being a example, it makes me become responsible.

I enjoy playing the instruments, and I am also adroit at it. Therefore, I joined the wind band to learn to play more instruments. Although I bumped into many challenges during the process, I finally overcame all difficulties. In addition , I believe playing the instrument makes me relax and stabilize my mind. It is a good way to release my pressure. Furthermore, I am also interested in learning Japanese which can increase my language ability. At the beginning, I knew nothing about Japanese, but gradually, I got to know it very well. Besides English, I choose Japanese as my minor major, and
I think it will help me a lot when I apply for jobs. I always play the instruments or read the Japanese and English books in my free time. No doubts, these will be helpful in the future.