Thursday, April 26, 2007

Autobiograthy3-4(Draft1)

Like other students, I took the BCT after graduating from junior high school. My grades were not bad, and my classmates thought I would get into a senior high school. To their surprise, I chose Tainan Commercial Vocational senior which is famous. I selectedthis school, for I want to learn some practical skills, and I am also interested in English. On account of good curriculums and teachers this school offers, the improvement of English makes me have more interest on it. Therefore, I paid more attention to all the English competitions. I took part in National English Drama Competition when I was a second grader, and we got the No.5. It makes me learn the importance of unity and build the self-confidence. These precious experiences give me a colorful senior high life.

I am firmly determined to study Foreign Language after graduating from vocational school. Hopefully, I can be admitted to a good university to prove myself. I want to show others that vocational high school students can also make it. I know it will be difficult to accomplish it, but as the saying goes, ”Where there is a will, there is a way”. In addition, I plan to take Japanese cruises after getting into a university. I think learning Japanese can strengthen my language ability. I deeply believe that I can have a good future by getting into a good university and learning foreign languages and practical skills.

10 Comments:

Blogger Debie said...

I like these two sentences:
1.Like other students, I took the BCT after graduating from junior high school.
2.I am firmly determined to study Foreign Language after graduating from vocational school.
I think maybe you can tell more about your careers.

4:51 PM  
Blogger Penny said...

come on bigone
show them we are all excellent,too!!

5:15 PM  
Blogger Sally Sun said...

Right!we will show them how excellent we are.

7:48 PM  
Blogger Estella said...

find no mistake

10:46 PM  
Blogger Phoebe Lee said...

What is "BCT"? Is that call 基測?
I think your article is excellent.
But, I agree with Debie.

10:13 PM  
Blogger 邱暐心 said...

Bigone!
I think your writing skill is really really good!!

10:33 AM  
Blogger Sally Sun said...

thanks a lot! It is my pleasure.

10:42 AM  
Blogger 薪雯 said...

selectedthis連在一起了,just small problem. 寫的很棒!!You did a good job.

10:56 AM  
Blogger 林小雞 said...

very good job! Bigone

11:13 AM  
Blogger Vivian said...

To I selectedthis school,
=> selected this 要分開唷

11:19 AM  

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