Autobiograthy3-4(Draft1)
Like other students, I took the BCT after graduating from junior high school. My grades were not bad, and my classmates thought I would get into a senior high school. To their surprise, I chose Tainan Commercial Vocational senior which is famous. I selectedthis school, for I want to learn some practical skills, and I am also interested in English. On account of good curriculums and teachers this school offers, the improvement of English makes me have more interest on it. Therefore, I paid more attention to all the English competitions. I took part in National English Drama Competition when I was a second grader, and we got the No.5. It makes me learn the importance of unity and build the self-confidence. These precious experiences give me a colorful senior high life.
I am firmly determined to study Foreign Language after graduating from vocational school. Hopefully, I can be admitted to a good university to prove myself. I want to show others that vocational high school students can also make it. I know it will be difficult to accomplish it, but as the saying goes, ”Where there is a will, there is a way”. In addition, I plan to take Japanese cruises after getting into a university. I think learning Japanese can strengthen my language ability. I deeply believe that I can have a good future by getting into a good university and learning foreign languages and practical skills.
I am firmly determined to study Foreign Language after graduating from vocational school. Hopefully, I can be admitted to a good university to prove myself. I want to show others that vocational high school students can also make it. I know it will be difficult to accomplish it, but as the saying goes, ”Where there is a will, there is a way”. In addition, I plan to take Japanese cruises after getting into a university. I think learning Japanese can strengthen my language ability. I deeply believe that I can have a good future by getting into a good university and learning foreign languages and practical skills.

10 Comments:
I like these two sentences:
1.Like other students, I took the BCT after graduating from junior high school.
2.I am firmly determined to study Foreign Language after graduating from vocational school.
I think maybe you can tell more about your careers.
come on bigone
show them we are all excellent,too!!
Right!we will show them how excellent we are.
find no mistake
What is "BCT"? Is that call 基測?
I think your article is excellent.
But, I agree with Debie.
Bigone!
I think your writing skill is really really good!!
thanks a lot! It is my pleasure.
selectedthis連在一起了,just small problem. 寫的很棒!!You did a good job.
very good job! Bigone
To I selectedthis school,
=> selected this 要分開唷
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