Having piles(Draft two)

Jane and York are good friends. One afternoon, York received a call from Jane. Jane was weeping and saying that she had piles. York felt sorry because he was also the victim of piles. York told Jane that she should go to see the doctor , and have it removed. Jane said that she was afraid that it would hurt. From that day on, York constantly encouraged Jane to go to the doctor and remove the piles. Finally, it was too painful for Jane to bear; therefore, she decided to have the piles removed. After removing the piles, Jane felt comfortable and thankful. So Jane asked York to marry her, and save other victims of piles with her.What a perfect ending!