Tips for Staying Healthy(Draft one)
People have paid more attention to the health recently. In my opinion, there are three tips for staying healthy. Firstly, take exercise frequently because exercise can prevent our bodies from aging. Like wise, exercise can help sweat then excrete the waste in our bodies. Secondly, quality sleep is also important. According to some researches, sleeping copiously can increase our bodies' immunity. Lastly, keep in a good mood anytime. Some experts pointed out that anger or nervousness may decrease cells' development , and even kill them. Above are the points for staying healthy. If you want to be healthy, keep them in mind!

5 Comments:
" exercise can help sweat then excrete the waste in our bodies."what you mean should be"...than.."(your spelling)
我的意思是運動可以流汗
然後排掉身體內的廢物
你的用字都好艱深
找不出哪裡怪...
好啦勉強算你可以啦
exercise can help sweat then excrete the waste in our bodies.then之前加個and會比較順吧
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