Sunday, December 10, 2006

An embarrassing experience(Draft one)

I had a very embarrassing experience. When I was an elementary school student, I once did badly on my math test. When I saw my grades , I couldn't help crying. Everyone in my class was suprised . My good friends came to me and said,"It is all right.Don't be sad." But some boys started laughing at me and said,"Stop crying .You're embarassing yourself." I was very angery and embarrassed. After school, I stayed in my classroom instead of going home. My best friend, Amy , sat beside me and said ,"Let's go home. Don't be sad." , so I stood up and left with her. All of a sudden, I tripped and fell . It was so funny that Amy counld't help laughing. I was so mad and said,"why are you laughing at me ? Don't you know I am embarrassed ?'' "Sorry,but it is very funny. Forgive me,"she said. I forgave her, and went back home . What an embarassing experience!

6 Comments:

Blogger Debie said...

"Sorry,but it is very funny. Forgive me,"Behind the sentence,you should use".",right?
By the way,if you avoid using the same sentence(can't stop...),it should be better!

8:20 PM  
Blogger 許雅婷 said...

有這樣的一個朋友真好,說真的我不知道妳那麼脆弱,現在變比較堅強了,畢竟妳是"大隻"
"Sorry,but it is very funny. Forgive me,"she said. 這個符號"應該擺在,之前

1:48 PM  
Blogger Estella said...

I forgave her, and went back home .

逗號後面的句子 好像少了什麼 我也不會講
大隻給人很有力的感覺消失了= ="...

10:35 PM  
Blogger 薪雯 said...

除了標點符號...其他應該就沒什麼問題了!

11:58 AM  
Blogger Penny said...

Not bad!
I can't believe that you were a such little girl...
don't cry baby

3:30 PM  
Blogger 邱暐心 said...

Everyone in my class was suprised.
這句的"surprised"拼錯了。

Stop crying .You're embarassing yourself.
這句的"embarrassing"拼錯了。

I was very angery and embarrassed.
這句的"angry"拼錯了。

It was so funny that Amy counld't help laughing.
這句的"couldn't"拼錯了。

What an embarassing experience!
這句的"embarrassing"拼錯了。

8:53 PM  

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