Having piles(Draft one)
Jane and York are good friends. One afternoon, York received a call from Jane. Janewas weeping and saying that she had piles. York felt sorry because he was also the victim of piles. York told Jane that she should go to wee the doctor ,and have it removed. Jane said that she was afraid that it would hurt. From that day on, York constantly encouraged Jane to go to the doctor and remove the piles. Finally, it was too painful for Jane to bear; therefore, she decided to have the piles removed. After removing the piles, Jane felt comfortable and thankful. So Jane asked York to marry her, and save other victims of piles with her.

13 Comments:
" wee "should be "see".By the way, your imagination is too aplenty.
有些字連在一起了!!
(Janewas)
你打的很急嘛?=.=
都沒什麼問題
大支沒惡搞一下
真不習慣
你在趕火車ㄏㄛ, 還打錯字...
真的喔~word很爛ㄟ
They married just because they had piles?!
呵呵~
還有..
word哪裡爛ㄚ~
是你太遜了啦~
趕火車被講了
那我說
你趕飛機嗎
在上傳之前先check一下你的字有沒有打錯嘛!
記得在WORD上面先打好!
還有
內容滿噁的!
Janewas weeping
was 前面沒空格
幹嘛一直抨擊我明明是word爛
在一起喔~我亂想的ㄟ
哈哈 好熱鬧喔這邊
路人甲.....
問題大概就只有上面那些而已吧...內容還滿噁的耶
It is a great story.
I learn the word "piles".
It is not humiliatory to have piles.
You can told us, BIGONE.
I don't have any piles
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