Saturday, March 10, 2007

Having piles(Draft one)

Jane and York are good friends. One afternoon, York received a call from Jane. Janewas weeping and saying that she had piles. York felt sorry because he was also the victim of piles. York told Jane that she should go to wee the doctor ,and have it removed. Jane said that she was afraid that it would hurt. From that day on, York constantly encouraged Jane to go to the doctor and remove the piles. Finally, it was too painful for Jane to bear; therefore, she decided to have the piles removed. After removing the piles, Jane felt comfortable and thankful. So Jane asked York to marry her, and save other victims of piles with her.

13 Comments:

Blogger Debie said...

" wee "should be "see".By the way, your imagination is too aplenty.

3:59 PM  
Blogger Estella said...

有些字連在一起了!!
(Janewas)
你打的很急嘛?=.=
都沒什麼問題

大支沒惡搞一下
真不習慣

11:14 PM  
Blogger Vivian said...

你在趕火車ㄏㄛ, 還打錯字...

10:39 AM  
Blogger Sally Sun said...

真的喔~word很爛ㄟ

10:44 AM  
Blogger 邱暐心 said...

They married just because they had piles?!
呵呵~
還有..
word哪裡爛ㄚ~
是你太遜了啦~

11:17 AM  
Blogger 邱秀珍 said...

趕火車被講了
那我說

你趕飛機嗎

11:19 AM  
Blogger Penny said...

在上傳之前先check一下你的字有沒有打錯嘛!
記得在WORD上面先打好!
還有
內容滿噁的!

11:22 AM  
Blogger Samantha*霓∥ said...

Janewas weeping
was 前面沒空格

11:30 AM  
Blogger Sally Sun said...

幹嘛一直抨擊我明明是word爛
在一起喔~我亂想的ㄟ

11:32 AM  
Blogger 林小雞 said...

哈哈 好熱鬧喔這邊

路人甲.....

11:40 AM  
Blogger 薪雯 said...

問題大概就只有上面那些而已吧...內容還滿噁的耶

11:46 AM  
Blogger Phoebe Lee said...

It is a great story.
I learn the word "piles".

It is not humiliatory to have piles.

You can told us, BIGONE.

12:01 PM  
Blogger Sally Sun said...

I don't have any piles

11:07 AM  

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