Autobiograthy-1(Draft 1)
At a silent night, many babies were born in Tainan city, and the luckiest one is me, my name is Sun Shao Jyuan. There are four members in my family. My father, a business person, is always busy doing his job to support my family. My mother is also a business person with a gentle personality. Since I was a baby, I have been well taken are of, for I am the firstborn child. My parents offer me almost everything I need and help me keep habits. That’s why I am the luckiest one. Yet, being the firstborn child, I have to set a good example to my young brother. Although I am under pressure of being a example, it makes me become responsible.
I enjoy playing the instruments, and I am also adroit at it. Therefore, I joined the wind band to learn to play more instruments. Although I bumped into many challenges during the process, I finally overcame all difficulties. In addition , I believe playing the instrument makes me relax and stabilize my mind. It is a good way to release my pressure. Furthermore, I am also interested in learning Japanese which can increase my language ability. At the beginning, I knew nothing about Japanese, but gradually, I got to know it very well. Besides English, I choose Japanese as my minor major, and
I think it will help me a lot when I apply for jobs. I always play the instruments or read the Japanese and English books in my free time. No doubts, these will be helpful in the future.
I enjoy playing the instruments, and I am also adroit at it. Therefore, I joined the wind band to learn to play more instruments. Although I bumped into many challenges during the process, I finally overcame all difficulties. In addition , I believe playing the instrument makes me relax and stabilize my mind. It is a good way to release my pressure. Furthermore, I am also interested in learning Japanese which can increase my language ability. At the beginning, I knew nothing about Japanese, but gradually, I got to know it very well. Besides English, I choose Japanese as my minor major, and
I think it will help me a lot when I apply for jobs. I always play the instruments or read the Japanese and English books in my free time. No doubts, these will be helpful in the future.

5 Comments:
"At a silent night"should be"On a...";"I have been well taken are of"should be "taken care..."
I have been well taken are of
拼錯啦~是 care啦
instrument要注意單負數喔
因為你有的前後的單負數行不太一樣
注意一下!
應該沒啥大問題
被講完了
看不出來其他的問題!
你真的在應徵ㄟ...
Good job! Bigone~
你寫的還真多呀...
沒什麼問題了
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