Translation第1第3篇(Draft one)
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Computers play a vital role in our daily life. They can help students hand in homework fast, and also help people deliver information in time. As long as you turn on the computers, you may be fond of them. However, be sure to tell yourself not to sit in front of computes too long. Most parents do not like their children depending on computers too much. Above all, it wastes time to talk on the electronic bulletin board system.
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Choosing TV channels carefully is vital. Although television is the most significant way of providing information and entertainment, it may have some defects. Some channels that are full of violence and lust have negative effects on teenagers. Spending too much time watching televisions also hurts the eyesight. Therefore, we should select the programs which are good for our bodies and minds. The most important is not to be a couch potato.
Computers play a vital role in our daily life. They can help students hand in homework fast, and also help people deliver information in time. As long as you turn on the computers, you may be fond of them. However, be sure to tell yourself not to sit in front of computes too long. Most parents do not like their children depending on computers too much. Above all, it wastes time to talk on the electronic bulletin board system.
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Choosing TV channels carefully is vital. Although television is the most significant way of providing information and entertainment, it may have some defects. Some channels that are full of violence and lust have negative effects on teenagers. Spending too much time watching televisions also hurts the eyesight. Therefore, we should select the programs which are good for our bodies and minds. The most important is not to be a couch potato.

6 Comments:
" it wastes time to talk on the electronic bulletin board system."
should be"...talking..."
The most important is not to be a couch potato.
important後面加個名詞會好些!
應該沒有了 ...
Bigone ok的啦!
沒什麼問題
阿姨就是不一樣
沒問題了
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