Sally Sun's writting class

Thursday, January 18, 2007

Pollution(Draft two)

Pollution is a serious problem on earth. I think there are two points which can explain the cause of pollution. One, human beings invent things which ruin the environment. Two, being selfish , people do not think of the environment ,and they overuse the natural resource. Due to theirs selfishness , the effect of pollution becomes people's retribution. The natural resource we can use becomes less and less ,and pollution jeopardizes our health. The most important is that it will cost us more to protect the environment. Therefore, how to improve pollution is the most important subject in the world. How do we improve our environment? Firstly, we can grow more trees to improve air pollution. Secondly, make it a habbit to recycle, so we will not waste any resource. Thirdly, stop using the substance which may ruin the environment. Living on earth , we should protect our environment , and make the world better and better.

Monday, January 15, 2007

My Bedroom(Draft Two)

I have a bedroom, and all the furniture was arranged by myself. When you get into my room,the first thing you notice is my messy desk because there are lots of books, paper on it. The left wall is lined with dressing table, which I have not used for a long time. Next to the dressingtable is a cabinet where I put a CD player. Beside the cabinet is my bed, and there are many things on my bed. For example, a pillow, a blanket , an alarm clock , and many others. Above the bed is a window, and through it I can see my neighbors. The wall of the right side is lined with my closet where I fill my clothes. My book cabinet is on the right corner, and it is next to my door. When I open my door, it always bumps the book cabinet. Therefore, I think I should change the position of my furniture.

Saturday, January 13, 2007

Pollution(Draft One)

Pollution is a serious problem on earth. I think there are two points which can explain the cause of pollution. One, human beings invent things which ruin the environment. Two, being selfish , people do not think of the environment ,and they overuse the natural resource. Due to theirs selfishness , the effect of pollution becomes people's retribution. The natural resource we can use becomes less and less ,and pollution jeopardizes our health. The most important is that it will cost us more to protect the environment. Therefore, how to improve pollution is the most important subject in the world. How do we improve our environment? Firstly, we can grow more trees to improve air pollution. Secondly, make it a habbit to recycle, so we will not waste any resource. Thirdly, stop using the substance which may ruin the environment. Living on earth , we should protect our environment , and make the world better and better.

Saturday, January 06, 2007

My Bedroom(Draft One)

I have a bedroom, and all the furniture was arranged by myself. When you get into my room,the first thing you notice is my messy desk because there are lots of books, paper on it. The left wall is lined with dressing table, which I have not used for a long time. Next to the dressingtable is a cabinet where I put a CD player. Beside the cabinet is my bed, and there are many things on my bed. For example, a pillow, a blanket , an alarm clock , and many others. Above the bed is a window, and through it I can see my neighbors. The wall of the right side is lined with my closet where I fill my clothes. My book cabinet is on the right corner, and it is next to my door. When I open my door, it always bumps the book cabinet. Therefore, I think I should change the position of my furniture.

Monday, January 01, 2007

An embarrassing experience(Draft two)

I had a very embarrassing experience. When I was an elementary school student, I once did badly on my math test. When I saw my grades , I couldn't help crying. Everyone in my class was surprised . My good friends came to me and said,"It is all right.Don't be sad." But some boys started laughing at me and said,"Stop crying .You're embarrassing yourself." I was very angry and embarrassed. After school, I stayed in my classroom instead of going home. My best friend, Amy , sat beside me and said ,"Let's go home. Don't be sad." , so I stood up and left with her. All of a sudden, I tripped and fell . It was so funny that Amy couldn't help but laugh. I was so mad and said,"why are you laughing at me ? Don't you know I am embarrassed ?'' "Sorry,but it is very funny. Forgive me.",she said. I forgave her, and left without saying anything .I went back home alone instead of with her. What an embarassing experience!