Sally Sun's writting class

Saturday, June 23, 2007

Making decision (Draft3)

Growing up means making my own decisions. When we are old enough, we are able to take responsibility for our decisions. As we grow older, our mind grows maturer, and we become more independent and responsible. We may find that we are no more those who always depend on others. Therefore, we should begin to learn to make decisions by ourselves.
The hardest decision that I ever made so far was to choose a senior high school after my graduating from junior high school. A few days after BCT,I received my report card which made me feel annoyed. My grades were a little above the average, and my mother hoped that I could get into a senior high school. Unlike my mother, my father wanted me to enter National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school. I was very irresolute because I thought both were good. It was really hard for me to make such a difficult decision ,and it almost drove me crazy. After having pondered for a long time, I determined to study in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school to learn practical skills. I am glad that I made the correct decision. National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school truly brings me a wonderful school

Thursday, June 21, 2007

Making decisions(Draft 2)

Growing up means making my own decisions. When we are old enough, we are able to take responsibility for our decisions. As we grow older, our mind grows maturer, and we become more independent and responsible. We may find that we are not those who always depend on others anymore. Therefore, we should begin to learn to make decisions by ourselves.
The hardest decision that I ever made so far was to choose a senior high school after my graduating from junior high school. A few days after BCT(國中基測),I received my report card which made me feel annoyed. My grades were a little above the average, and my mother hoped that I could get into a senior high school. Unlike my mother, my father wanted me to enter National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school. I was very irresolute because I though both were good. It was really hard for me to make such a difficult decision ,and it almost drove me crazy. After having pondered for a long time, I determined to study in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school to learn practical skills. I am glad that I have made the correct decision. National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school truly brings me a wonderful school life.

Friday, June 15, 2007

Making Decisions(Draft 1)

Growing up means making my own decisions. When we are old enough, we are able to take responsibility for our decisions. As we grow older, our mind grows maturer, and we become more independent and responsible. We may find that we are not those who always count on others anymore. Therefore, we should begin to learn to make decisions by ourselves.

The hardest decision that I ever made was to choose a senior high school after my graduating from junior high school. A few days after BCT(國中基測),I received my report card which made me feel annoyed. My grades were in the middle, and my mother hoped that I could get into a senior high school. Unlike my mother, my father wanted me to enter National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school. I was very irresolute because I though both were good. It was really hard for me to make such a difficult decision ,and it almost drove me nuts. After having pondered for a long time, I determined to select National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school to learn practical skills. I am glad that I have made a correct decision. National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school truly brings me a wonderful school life.

Autobiograthy(Draft 3)

Like other students, I took the BCT(國中基測) after graduating from junior high school. My grades were not bad, and my classmates thought I would get into a senior high school. To their surprise, I chose Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school which is famous for providing the best vocational training. I selected this school, for I want to learn some practical skills, and I am also interested in English. Thanks to the excellent curriculums and teachers this school offers, my English greatly improves, and I become more interested in it. Therefore, I pay more attention to all the English competitions. I took part in National English Drama Competition when I was a second grader, and we got the fifth prize .It makes me learn not only the beauty of language but also the meaning of drama ; moreover, it helps me build self-confidence. These precious experiences give me a colorful senior high life.I am firmly determined to study Foreign Language after graduating from vocational school. Hopefully, I can be admitted to a good university to prove myself. I am very eager to show others that vocational high school students can also make good achievement in entering university. I know it will be difficult to accomplish it, but as the saying goes, ”Where there is a will, there is a way”. In addition, I plan to take Japanese as my elective courses after getting into a university. I think learning Japanese can strengthen my language abiliy. I deeply believe that I can have a good future by getting into a good university and learning foreign languages and practical skills.

Thursday, June 14, 2007

Tips for Staying Health(Draft three)

People have paid more attention to health recently. In my opinion, there are three tips for staying healthy. Firstly, take exercise frequently because it can prevent our bodies from aging. Likewise, exercise can also make us sweat and then excrete the waste in our bodies. Secondly, good-quality sleep is also important. According to some researches, sleeping copiously can increase our bodies' immunity. Lastly, keep in a good mood anytime. Some experts pointed out that anger or nervousness may decrease cells' development and even kill them. Above are the tips for staying healthy. If you want to be healthy, keep them in mind!

Having Piles(Draft three)

Jane and York are good friends. One afternoon, York received a call from Jane. Jane wept and said that she had piles. York felt sorry because he was also the victim of piles. York told Jane that she should go to see the doctor , and have it removed. Jane said that she was afraid that it would have bad effects on herself . From that day on, York constantly encouraged Jane to go to the doctor and remove the piles. Finally, it was too painful for Jane to bear; therefore, she determined to have the piles removed. After removing the piles, Jane felt comfortable and thankful.Hence Jane asked York to marry her, and saved other victims of piles with her.What a perfect ending!

Translate(Draft three)

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Computers play a vital role in our daily life. They can help students hand in homework quickly and also help people send information in time. As long as you turn on the computers, you will be fond of them. However, be sure to tell yourself not to sit in front of computes too long. Most parents do not like their children to depend on computers too much. Above all, it wastes time talking on the electronic bulletin board system.
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Choosing TV channels carefully is vital. Although television is the most significant way of providing information and entertainment, it may have some defects. Some channels that are full of violence and lust have negative effects on teenagers. Spending too much time watching televisions also hurts our eyesight. Therefore, we should select the programs which are good for our bodies and minds. The most important thing is not to be a couch potato.

Thursday, June 07, 2007

Computer and I (Draft two)

Computers play a more and more important role in modern life. They have been widely used throughout our life. As we know, we can use computers to buy products on the Internet. Therefore, we won't feel annoyed because we don't have to choose which vehicles to take when we go shopping. Aside from shopping on the Internet, we can also find that computers can substitute manpower and control machines. For instance, many factories and companies use computers to manage their production line instead of real workers recently. In addition, we can discover that we are able to get abundant information which we do not know from the Interent. People used to learn what happen from TV and newspaper before. Compared with the past, we can now utilize computers to obtain the information as well. Computers are widely used now, and people have relied on computers for so long. It goes without saying that we can not live without computers in the future.

Personally, I have a dislike for computers. Despite the advantages computers bring, I can not ignore the weaknesses computers have. Firstly, computers do harm to our eyesight and irritate our eyes. It is pointed out that people who often play the computers games are more likely to have poor eyesight than those who don't . Some experts even indicate that computers may decrease our intelligence and make us become stupid. Secondly, many people use computers to commit crimes which police are not aware of. Computers really cause a lot of social problems now. In my opinion, computers benefit us people a lot, but they may destroy us as well as our society someday.